plz review my new tour

[oil]

Hi Jerks <img border="0" title="" alt="[Big Grin]" src="biggrin.gif" /> <br />plz review my new tour, it´s not 100 % done i want to insert some flash too, but first your opinion, before I finish all the stuff<br />thx

[oil]

<img border="0" alt="[ROTFLMAO]" title="" src="graemlins/rotflmao.gif" /> I forgat the URL <img border="0" title="" alt="[Roll Eyes]" src="rolleyes.gif" /> <br /><a href="http://www.outdoor-babes.com" target="_blank">www.outdoor-babes.com</a><br /> <img border="0" alt="[Embarassed]" title="" src="graemlins/embarassed.gif" /> <br />thx

[PeepNTom]

hmmm where might we find a link to review this <img border="0" title="" alt="[Roll Eyes]" src="rolleyes.gif" />

[PeepNTom]

ha....no wonder my post didnt go through <img border="0" title="" alt="[Big Grin]" src="biggrin.gif" /> <br /><br />we must have been posting at the same time

[PeepNTom]

looks good, cant say its the best I've ever seen<br />though - but it will work<br /><br />good luck <img border="0" alt="[Hi]" title="" src="graemlins/hi.gif" />

[SexySites]

looks pretty good ...fast loading too <img border="0" title="" alt="[Big Grin]" src="biggrin.gif" /> <br />which is always a bonus <br /><br />laters,<br />Chris

[arthurdent]

<img border="0" alt="[Hi]" title="" src="graemlins/hi.gif" /> <br /><br />On splash page:<br /> <img border="0" title="" alt="[Eek!]" src="eek.gif" /> <br />Instand Access<br /> <img border="0" title="" alt="[Eek!]" src="eek.gif" /> <br /><br /> <img border="0" title="" alt="[Wink]" src="wink.gif" /> <br /><br />peace

[c-head]

Nice site oil. Now, let the grammar king help you out a little <img border="0" title="" alt="[Wink]" src="wink.gif" /> <br /><br />1. Someone already pointed out that 'Instant' has been spelt 'Instand'<br /><br />2. In the main splash graphic it says 'The Worlds Hottest Sluts fucking Outside'. You have capitals on everything except 'fucking'. If anything you should be drawing people to the word 'Fucking' rather than giving it less emphasis than the rest of the sentence.<br /><br />3. At the bottom you say 'cause customer requested'. This suggests to me that you are either very young or else grammar wasn't a strong point. It really should be 'Because customers have requested, we have added...'.<br /><br />4. Would a 'huge' archive be better than a 'great' archive. I can get 'great' at any pay site but if you have something 'huge' then that may interest me more (if I were a surfer that is) <img border="0" title="" alt="[Smile]" src="smile.gif" /> .<br /><br />Don't take the criticisms as putting your site down - it's a nice looking site. I'm being a little bit hyper critical and I'm not necessarily an expert ... but hey, if any of this helps you out then that's a good thing(tm).

[basschick]

i don't care for this page <a href="http://www.outdoor-babes.com/" target="_blank">http://www.outdoor-babes.com/</a> because it looks like a patchwork quilt - just cut up pieces thrown together. since the focus is outdoor, i think that you could have less pics in the graphic but have all of them show outdoors. <br /><br />i like the pics here <a href="http://www.outdoor-babes.com/tour_02.html" target="_blank">http://www.outdoor-babes.com/tour_02.html</a> MUCH better.<br /><br />maybe one more tour page would be nice, too.<br /><br />interesting niche - how does it do for you?

[toker]

Def the tour page looks better then the splash man but spent more time blending and cropping to give it a cleaner appearance.

[oil]

Thx all, <br />@c-head, gonna fix this, my grammar was always worse <img border="0" title="" alt="[Frown]" src="frown.gif" /> - thx<br />@basschick, thx for your advice it´s good to hear I always thought tour 1 (index looks better)<br />I had a third tour page & redesign them into this only two new cause I realized that from tour 01 till tour 3 I lost the most visitor, so I thought may I gonna do it a bit faster. <br />about the niche <img border="0" title="" alt="[Smile]" src="smile.gif" /> it converts pretty good for me <img border="0" title="" alt="[Big Grin]" src="biggrin.gif" /> and the best part is that I never thought customers would stay so many month at a site <img border="0" title="" alt="[Big Grin]" src="biggrin.gif" /> the only point is to find webmasters who want to promote it, well if we are at this point do you think 50 % recurrring is to low ?<br />@toker - i took the most time on cropping this pics can you plz be more specific about what you meant by this ?<br />thx, to all <img border="0" alt="[Bounce]" title="" src="graemlins/bounce.gif" />