My first one!

[morepornmovies]

Sup guys? <br /><br />I just completed my first FPA/Splash page and was wondering if someone could take a look at it and let me know what they think. Please be critical because this is my first one and I want to know what is good and what isn't. The <a href="http://www.porndreams.net/pmarchives/main.html" target="_blank">URL is here</a> so please take the time and review it for me. It is very much appreciated.<br /><br />BTW this isn't spam because the ref code to Adult Bbouncer isn't even activated yet. <br /><br />Thanks in advance!

[morepornmovies]

Come on someone gotta help me out. Please take a look at it and let me know what you think.

[Zane]

I guess you asked, so here it goes...<br /><br />it's over-compressed, the text is so blurry it's next to impossible to read, the layout is too "boxy", and there is really nothing there that would get me to click to your next page.<br /><br />on the bright side it's better graphics work than I could do. <img border="0" title="" alt="[Razz]" src="tongue.gif" /> <br /><br />but I think you should work on it a little more. <img border="0" alt="[Nod]" title="" src="graemlins/nod.gif" /> <br /><br />Good luck

[morepornmovies]

Thanks for the reply...I'll try to uncompress it and make it a little less boxy. I had a feeling it was a little too crowded. <img border="0" title="" alt="[Smile]" src="smile.gif" /> <br /><br />Anyone else have any comments or suggestions? I'd love to hear them.

[morepornmovies]

OK, I've revamped the look. The new URL is <a href="http://www.porndreams.net/pmarchives/mainnew.html" target="_blank">here</a> and the old one is <a href="http://www.porndreams.net/pmarchives/main.html" target="_blank">here</a>. Can someone please take a look at the new revamped edition and let me know what they think? Remeber BE CRITICAL...hehe. Thanks! <img border="0" title="" alt="[Smile]" src="smile.gif" />

[SexySites]

Much better than before...and much better than most of the bad designs which adultbouncer supports...<br /><br />Nice to see someone who is going for a quality design rather than entering the competitition for how many thumbs they can fit on a page <img border="0" title="" alt="[Wink]" src="wink.gif" /> <br /><br />laters,<br />Chris